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Friday, 29 November 2013

Bethan has been writing a short story.....

Death lurked
Death lurked in every doorway with hell at one dark window. My hair stood on end, a shiver raced down my spine and a lump came to my throat. It was him…
The air turned black all around me, icy fingers gripped my arm in the darkness.  Closer and closer it came. I blacked out…
Am I in heaven? What happened to me? The lights flicked, and there he was! Me handcuffed to the chair. Stuck. A scream shattered the silence.
Then it stopped.


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4 comments:

  1. Lucie12 December 2013 at 01:47

    I love you 100 word challenge bethan!!
    from Lucie

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  2. Alex12 December 2013 at 01:54

    Very interesting story you have written Bethan,
    I like how you ended the story on a cliffhanger.

    Alex.

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  3. Louie T12 December 2013 at 01:57

    Great 100 word challenge Bethan.

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  4. Unknown12 December 2013 at 02:47

    Great story! And thank you to all the students who've been reading The Skull in the Wood - I've been getting some lovely comments via my website! Hope you continue to enjoy it!

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