To whom it may concern,
We've heard the dreadful news about the hurricane and we are sending first aid helicopters and a saviour ship, both with precious cargo containing food and water. They'll be here soon.
Yours sincerely,
Your saviour.
Thursday, 21 November 2013
Alfie's 100 Word Challenge Week #12
I ventured through the maze of palm trees, scavenging for food like the many other families affected by the typhoon, I held my hands out in front of me, pushing my way through the leaves when I tripped and fell. Feeling sand on my face, I knew I was back at the beach. I pulled myself up, noticing a grass-green bottle on the shore, half buried with rocks and sand.
I picked it up and saw a soggy old letter inside, it read:
To whom it may concern,
We've heard the dreadful news about the hurricane and we are sending first aid helicopters and a saviour ship, both with precious cargo containing food and water. They'll be here soon.
Yours sincerely,
Your saviour.
To whom it may concern,
We've heard the dreadful news about the hurricane and we are sending first aid helicopters and a saviour ship, both with precious cargo containing food and water. They'll be here soon.
Yours sincerely,
Your saviour.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Fantastic Alfie! Amazing use of vocabulary, it really makes it come to life.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
Molly R! :)
Well done. I thought you'd misunderstood the prompt at first which was to write a letter of encouragement, but I see you have done it in an original way. Some excellent description of the aftermath of the typhoon.
ReplyDeleteAmazing 100 word challenge, I love all the fantastic adjectives you used it is so powerful and descriptive!!!!!
ReplyDeleteLaura H :)
Awesome 100wc story, you have great vocabulary. A great description. Keep up the work.
ReplyDeleteFrom ???
I love your descriptive 100wc. It make it come to life. good work.
ReplyDeleteFrom louis ;-)