8 April 2003
“But I
thought I had enough time,” I said.
7 April 2003
– Military Mission – 14:21
I was
crawling silently through the long grass, with Riley (my military dog.) Just
then enemy troops passed by with their heavy armour tank. If I made a sound,
there would be trouble.
At about 14:25 I moved on. I knelt by some dug up earth.
In the
distance there was a missile, being lifted up into the sky, it was huge.
Suddenly, BOOM!!! The missile was dropped and only leaving Riley and I
survivors, maybe not. I didn’t have enough time to defuse the missile.
Well done Louis, this has a real life military feel to it as you carefully chose lots of words to do with this. I love the ending which leaves the reader guessing about you and Riley and whether you will both survive...
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