Dear Maple Class, I really enjoyed reading your weather personification poetry - what a talented group of poets you are! Your poems are menacing, dark and threatening - great work! What did you enjoy about writing them? How did you come up with your ideas and imagery? Mrs Monaghan A Room with a View (UK)
Wow these poems are amazing. Some of them rhyme as well when I did mine I didn't rhyme because it is really hard. Bethan, Bella, Beth, Callum , Lucas, Louis and Alex. You really stood out to me they were incredible Well done.
WOW! All these poems are amazing, sounds like you put a lot of effort into them! I especially love lucas' poem. He has used great vocabulary, words i never knew of.And even if it is hard to admit ( because he's my brother) i'm pretty sure I was never that good in year six!! :) ;)
from Amy , (previous maple student, of the BEST year six class!!)
Awesome! These have a great aspect to the text and the themes are so precise. You have talent in your class, I'm sure you'll all be writers when your older (or even better). From Karis (in Egypt!!!!!!)
Dear Maple Class,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your weather personification poetry - what a talented group of poets you are! Your poems are menacing, dark and threatening - great work! What did you enjoy about writing them? How did you come up with your ideas and imagery?
Mrs Monaghan
A Room with a View (UK)
Wow these poems are amazing. Some of them rhyme as well when I did mine I didn't rhyme because it is really hard. Bethan, Bella, Beth, Callum , Lucas, Louis and Alex. You really stood out to me they were incredible Well done.
ReplyDeleteWOW! All these poems are amazing, sounds like you put a lot of effort into them! I especially love lucas' poem. He has used great vocabulary, words i never knew of.And even if it is hard to admit ( because he's my brother) i'm pretty sure I was never that good in year six!! :) ;)
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I really like Lucas's, and Katie's poem!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow Maple Class! I am very impressed with your winter poems. They are all so descriptive and very well written. Well done to all of you.
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Awesome! These have a great aspect to the text and the themes are so precise. You have talent in your class, I'm sure you'll all be writers when your older (or even better).
ReplyDeleteFrom Karis (in Egypt!!!!!!)
Hi Maple Class, I really like your poems but Pav's and Lucas's caught my eye I really like the use of descriptive words. From Bethan!!!
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